Monday, April 14, 2008

Living with war every day in my heart

Please America, let’s stop putting our dirty nose in every other countries scandals and tried to figure our own out. We our not the police of the world, we cant solve everyone’s else's problems much less our own. For example, after 911 America was looking for someone to blame, and they picked Osama Ben Laden. America invaded Afghanistan and tried to find the best player of hiding seek their ever was. well, it happens to be they didn't catch or even find him. Soon after, America invaded Iraq and declared war upon them. For what? They didn't do anything to us, Osama did. We (America) have been in Iraq for six years now; the longest war America had ever been in i might add. Over what? Nothing but judging them by our own morals. Example #2 Vietnam. Hers is another great case of us sticking our nose in other peoples business. America had a policy called "Containment" witch meant that America would stop communism from growing any where in the world. Why, their not on our country or our land, how does this affect us? Anyway, we invade Vietnam and stay their fighting for about 12 years. All because we didn't like how they ran their own country. History just shows that we need to keep to ourselves and leave other people alone. If they don’t mess with us, we shouldn't mess with them.

1 comment:

carrie said...

Valid arguments, but some factual errors. The U.S. invaded Iraq because of false intelligence that said Hussein had facilities capable of producing nuclear weapons. Iraq is not the U.S.' longest war, Vietnam is. Good points about U.S. involvement in Vietnam.

Quite a few small errors that I can help you fix to earn maximum points. As is 17/20 points.